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3 Secrets to Optimizing Landing Page Copy

 

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2310818410 93d8d5527c mI recently attended MECLAB’s Landing Page Optimization Summit where Dr. Flint McGlaughlin presented his research to a sold-out audience.  Through colorful analogies and real-world examples, McGlaughlin explained a series of lessons around landing page optimization and writing highly effective copy.  Among the laundry list of insights I recorded in my notes, here are the most memorable:

1. Headlines are Like Pickup Lines. Don’t be arrogant!

The idea here is to start a conversation with your website visitors without sounding pretentious or arrogant. You don’t want to be "that guy". You know the one - the guy who loves to tell girls the joke about the gun show.  When a visitor arrives on your page, you have only a short period of time to convince them not to press the "Back" button on their browser. If your headlines have too much hype (e.g. "An Event You Can’t Afford To Miss!!"), it will turn people off.  Headlines play a critical role in convincing a visitor that it is worthwhile for them to stick around and get to know you better. A good headline clearly and honestly states the value of your offer.

2. Clearly & Honestly State the Value Proposition

If the visitor doesn’t know what you’re offering, they won’t care enough to continue reading, much less convert on your landing page. Your web page should clearly state 1) where they are on your site so they know they are in the right place, 2) what they can do on that page, and  3) why should they should care about what is on that page.  It sounds simple, but it’s surprising how many landing pages do not clearly communicate these points. 

As with the headline, it’s important not to be too pushy.  Avoid statements that command visitors to “download now”. Instead, focus on the value to the visitor, such as “gain immediate access” or a “free download”. 

3. Be Specific

The more specific you can be about why your offer is valuable, the better.  Bulleted lists of the benefits and features of your offer will not only guide the reader’s eyes, it will also demonstrate the tangible value of your offer. This is even more effective if you can state them with numbers. Quantified proof gives you credibility.  Many of your visitors are probably already jaded from seeing too many false promises and exaggerated claims online.  If you can provide them with concrete numbers supporting your value proposition, it will be easier for them to trust you.

For more advice on optimizating your landing pages, download a free chapter from MarketingSherpa's latest report on the key components to a successful landing page optimization strategy.

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Posted by Melissa Miller on Tue, Jun 07, 2011 @ 04:00 PM

COMMENTS

I absolutely love MECLABS. Flint is so fun to listen to and I love what they teach. Every marketer should be tuned into Marketing Experiments.com

posted on Tuesday, June 07, 2011 at 5:20 PM by david black


yeah it sound like me at the beginning when starting out as customer to find product, and as a matter of fact it does true as Melissa Miller have say.Acer 11.6 Netbook 

posted on Tuesday, June 07, 2011 at 6:28 PM by Joplin


funny that I couldn't notice the ad at the sidebar saying "download now" as I was reading the 2nd point of using "free download" instead of that. 
 
but simple and basic points to be followed that we marketers miss so many times.

posted on Tuesday, June 07, 2011 at 8:17 PM by Roshan


Flint is outstanding; in fact, the "FRODO" checklist I teach people for evaluating their sites, to find conversion rate holes, is very largely based on his "Where am I? What can I do here? Why should I do it?" rule. 
 
And your comment about headlines is spot on. It makes me cringe to see so many freelance designers, for example, saying "Hello, I'm a designer" on their websites in HUGE text, with nary a line of body copy to follow. 
 
I'd be inclined to add one more point to those you've mentioned, which is to always ask prospects to do something. A great headline + clear value prop + specificity still won't achieve all that much without a strong call to action. So knowing the objective of each page, in relation to your revenue goals, is hugely important...yet <em>so many</em> website owners haven't even thought to think about this.

posted on Wednesday, June 08, 2011 at 1:57 AM by D Bnonn Tennant


Very nice points to get across. Hubspot's landing page generator does a great job of forcing you to follow these guidelines as you create page. These items help keep your company and offer transparent and not "needy", "spammy", or "pushy".

posted on Wednesday, June 08, 2011 at 8:57 AM by Tracy Terry


These are good tips. It is also important to have somewhat nice design. I know design can be subjective but there is such a thing as just poor design.

posted on Thursday, June 09, 2011 at 6:24 AM by Maciej Fita


very cool tips, I will try them out soon, thank you very much for this blog.

posted on Monday, June 13, 2011 at 5:24 PM by Morten


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